This is still a work in progress, but it is an experiment in the Haibun form [link] (as explained by`Laurence55). [EDIT] I am trying to explore more forms so I can remove ignorance and move forward with my work.

1. Do you usually punctuate your poetry? Why/why not?
--I usually try to punctuate my poetry, but I often get muddled in the process. I'm still learning grammar.

2. Are there lines in this poem where you were considering other punctuation (or no punctuation)? If so, what were you considering and why?
--I had played with a dash where I put the comma in the first one, but decided a comma would do.

3. If this is a new draft of an old poem, do you feel better about your choices this time, or do you feel as if you were forcing the punctuation use?
--I had this in my head for three or four days before this workshop magically appeared in my message box. I quickly put it down and submitted it. I was forcing the punctuation, though. I wanted it to count towards the augmented meaning of the words.

4. Overall, what is the effect you would like this poem to have on the reader? In other words, what are you going for here?
--I want to have the same words repeated with the same enjambment, but to have their meaning altered through the punctuation. I won't call this complete because I need more information to carry the change to the reader, but it is poetic and a good example of how punctuation is important.