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the after down

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The After Down

A summer breeze has swept the streets
     In upbeat funk and rhythm,
And shade cascades on storm cloud lace
     And brown-brick faced urban children.

Streetcar rattle taps out coded memories:
Shampooed hair on unmade beds—
     Unknown pillows in shadowy, bright nights,
Exhaust that lingers in wakes of cars
Stopped for the empty changing of lights,
A memory of you waiting—
     Passing through.

Do you remember me like I do?
     The ‘me’ that wasn’t true?
     —The empty heat that blew through you, leaving?
     The storm I awoke to in the calm, sleepless morning?
          —The rain that almost fell?
2/10/9 - making some changes to try to work it better. I'm going to hopefully get some more feedback on it from my prof. after I submit it tonight.
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beneath-the-lenscap's avatar
extremely visual, beautiful
i love it <3